Rough Cut: 1

Rough Cut 1

On our first rough cut is:

• The idents are not on yet. 
• I have used different types of fonts to help us decide on which one we prefer.
• The sound track for the bedroom scene is on
• All scenes are on. 

Audience feedback that we have received on it is:

• Some shots are shaky and need to be edited too make them shorter.
• We defiantly need music and ambient sound all the way through.
• Not all of the scenery shots are the same length and time.
• The long takes in the bedroom need to be cut up and they are too long.
• The love triangle is the classroom scene is not clear yet.