ROUGH CUT: 3

Our third rough cut 

 In this we have altered:

• The titles by adding more and making the name of the recipient larger than their title. (I did this after research into titles in a previous blog) 
• We have tried to add a title but he font isn't right yet
• The scenery and bedroom shot have been cut down again
• Freeze frames have been put onto the characters faces and their name now appears introducing their character