tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6282102466067798593.post1956117936204249990..comments2019-11-27T19:47:49.373+00:00Comments on Harris productions: EVALUATION QUESTON 5 - How did you attract/address your audience?Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10257564766517306520noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6282102466067798593.post-20840250168046944962015-04-26T10:58:33.106+01:002015-04-26T10:58:33.106+01:00This is good. You need to add a clear note above t...This is good. You need to add a clear note above the video stating that To view the annotations you will need to frequently press pause, as I couldn't fit them all in without limiting the on-screen time for each!<br />If you can, have someone sit with you to go through the spelling of each (e.g. 'Shaun' Meadows = Shane)<br />Two aspects you should consider - just add details below the video or edit annotations: (1) verisimilitude (2) female/feminist<br />1: Idents establish this, and exist to market the companies involved (2) FemGaze, female director, opening on female character...<br />Re Harri - flatcap is surely a PLAYFUL, ironic (postmodern) signifier of Yorkshire? He's a hipster stereotype, which has social class connotations, and the Yorkshire stereotype is very much oppositional to this primarily Southern, middle/upper class stereotype<br />The note on edits/cinematography at 2:14 should be placed where such action occurs<br />Final titles – its non-normative (or counter-hegemonic)DBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01644270972807155523noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6282102466067798593.post-23158259256000156422015-04-23T07:03:39.287+01:002015-04-23T07:03:39.287+01:00As with my earlier comment:
start EVERY Eval Q wit...As with my earlier comment:<br />start EVERY Eval Q with the actual, full Q set out clearly<br />ALWAYS embed the video - let me know when you have and I'll have a look at this<br /><br />If any additional points do crop up, with the final cut still to be completed, just add details below the videoDBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01644270972807155523noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6282102466067798593.post-52344620648671027302015-04-08T12:53:19.736+01:002015-04-08T12:53:19.736+01:00Every Eval Q title needs to be clearer; the short ...Every Eval Q title needs to be clearer; the short versions I use in top links list is a good guide: http://asmediafilmopening.blogspot.co.uk/<br />Start post by setting out the Q in full<br /><br />At this point, lacking on layout and illustrative imagery - both need to be consistently provided<br />Sub-headings help with this, with blank lines between paragraphs, and some use where appropriate of bullet lists<br />e.g.: CLOTHING; SOUNDTRACK; GENRE + HYBRIDITY; BBFC RATING + LANGUAGE/SEXUAL CONTENT<br /><br />This is very brief as it stands, and provides very limited denotation from your text to back up points, plus zero clips/screenshots to illustrate points made. You're not limited to screenshots: taking a pic of costume and typing points around it, using arrows, is another way of adding to this. This or Q4 (you could also combine the two) is also the best choice for a YouTube annotations video, but you need the actual final cut for this - OR re-editing the (near) final cut to add titles, zoom in on aspects etc<br /><br />Other issues to address (these overlap):<br />SEXUALITY; INTERTEXTUALITY; VOICEOVER; ANCHORING THE CENTRAL PROTAGONIST + IDENTIFIYING WITH HER; NARRATIVE ENIGMA; USE OF GRAPHICS; EDITING STYLEDBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01644270972807155523noreply@blogger.com